34-Surprise Yourself

posted May 22nd, 2011, 1:46 am


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June 4th, 2011, 7:49 pm

laurbits

Thanks so much, Tsumetai & Scribe_Drizz! I really appreciate your comments. :)

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June 16th, 2011, 12:37 pm

laurbits

@Kirikirimai

Yeah! I wanted to post my own feedback at GoManga but the forums somehow locked me out. ;_; Tried retrieving my password but that doesn't work either.

They told me I it was good in general but I need to make it more polished and master the basic stuff like toning, linework and anatomy. :)

EDIT1: No problem at all! I did have a co-writer on this to help me shape the story and my sister gave a lot of feedback art-wise to polish it up.

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May 26th, 2011, 6:11 am

Tsumetai (Guest)

;w; i really liked this, so glad i found and read this story, it's so good.

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June 4th, 2011, 5:24 pm

scribe_drizz

This is a beautiful story! T___T

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April 11th, 2012, 12:37 pm

Tacto

This is a really nice story. I loved the characters and the general feel of it. It read very well, good pacing and very nice balance of serious and humor.
Great work on this :)

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April 11th, 2012, 12:45 pm

laurbits

@Tacto Thank you so much! I really appreciate it. <3 <3 <3

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